Struggled with whether the “plate glass window” thing is obvious or not here. Decided not to state it explicitly. Hope that was right.
You were right not to do it. I saw it straight-away in the second panel. I was waiting for the glass-window joke. Very telegraphed…
I noticed the possibility at the end of the first bubble, and expected that to be the punchline by the end of the first panel. Even though it left me watching for a punchline that never came, I think this was /much/ better than that would have been.
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