I wrote this one in the Fall of last year, and I have come close to running it half a dozen times. I finally did but its wordiness bugs me.
Part clip art. Part comic. All cop.
I wrote this one in the Fall of last year, and I have come close to running it half a dozen times. I finally did but its wordiness bugs me.
Since the verbosity, itself is part of the gag, but not really, so much, the content, I think it would hit sooner and harder if the thought bubble overlapped the second panel a bit.